Wednesday, October 7, 2009

DO YOU KNOW??


Do you know?
When you smile you seem to be,
the most delicate angel in this world.
Like a picturesque landscape,
you take my breath away.
Do you know?

Do you know?
When you hug me,
it feels like i am in the arms of my final wish.
The calmness and the joy,
i am ready to die, a thousand death for!
Do you know?

Do you know?
when you come close to me,
your fragrance enchants my mind,
just like the most fragrant flower on this earth.
Your aroma still lingers in my mind,
long after you are gone!
Do you know?

Do you know?
Every second I'm away from you,
seem as long as hours,every hour, as days, and every day a year?
Missing and longing for you,
as a chocking diver longs for air.
Do you know?

Do you know?
When i look into your eyes,
your innocence flashes from them,
just like a dove, gentle and pure!
You make my heart throb,
like never before.
Do you know?

Do you know?
How warm i feel,
when i see the concern for me, in your eyes.
Just like a gardener, taking care of the new born buds.
so selfless, so adorable!
Do you know?

Do you know?
If god offers me,either my heart beat or you,
i shall ask for you without thinking twice,
Even if my heart beats for the last time,
it shall beat for you!
Do you know?

Do you know?
If the almighty says, to choose between your love and my breath,
I shall take my last breath,
to say,"I LOVE YOU."
Then rest in peace forever!
Do you know?
Do you know?
Do you know? Honey...?
-Sumit

6 comments:

  1. How sweet....are you in love?You must be..your emotions are so real and pure...
    Do you know?
    If the almighty says, to choose between your love and my breath,
    I shall take my last breath,
    to say,"I LOVE YOU."
    Then rest in peace forever!
    I love it...Sumit..keep writing,and long live romance...

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  2. Well, I would say ''You are a true lover ''.
    Do you know that?
    Beautifully penned your feelings ..
    Keep Writing :)
    Because your writing reflects your inner emotions and thoughts!!!

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  3. @Alpana Yes i am. I am in love with the sweetest girl ever made (for me, that is). :) I sure am in love :)

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  4. @Simran :) well i dunno if i deserve what you said abt me :) Thank you :)
    yes i will, she is my love and writing is my passion :)

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  5. Do you know?
    That you could have made this into a song and would have invented more to make an album???
    Do you know?
    That your words are so lovely they can make a woman melt deep down her soul????
    Do you know Sumit?

    Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem...:)

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  6. @Jorie :) :D Thank you so much for making this lil poem for me :D Loved it :D

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