Friday, February 4, 2011

"BEING LONELY"



The moment you walked away,
In spite of my pleadings to you to stay.
Did you ever realize after?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

Did you ever feel anything,
Even a little pain?
when you made me cry through out the night?
Did you realize the contradicting feelings,
I had to fight, inside my heart?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

Did you look at my eyes,
Through the Silver Moon?
When i gazed at it with my watery eyes?
Thinking you must be doing the same..
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?



Did my memories ever cross you mind?
Did you ever miss me in your life?
like i always do,
like i always remember you!
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

Did you ever recall my words?
The times when i said,'I LOVE YOU"?
The times when you blushed and hugged me tight?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

Do you ever miss my care?
When you were sick, and i ask god is it fair?
Did you ever call my number and cut your call?
Did your heart miss me? Miss my eyes?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

Did your lips shake?
While taking my name...
Why did you forgot me,
in midst of all the fame?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?


Didn't you feel anything?
When you forgot the promises you ever made to me?
Didn't it hurt even a little,
while pushing me into the deep dark hell?
How did you feel, when you tore my heart?

There is one last thing i want to say,
"WHY ON EARTH DID YOU COME TO ME?
MADE ME SEE YOU AS MY LOVING LIFE?
WHEN YOU HAD TO TEAR MY HEART INTO BITS."
Didn't you feel anything,when you tore my heart?
-Sumit

12 comments:

  1. So Painful..But, awesome write..

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  2. Sad and haunted poem, hope you are fine now.

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  3. @Sulekha :) yes i am fine now, and actually i am happy, after her going i found the sweetest girl ever :) Thank you for the comment :)

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  4. I am so happy for you, I am following your blog now.

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  5. @Sulekha Thank you for following.. So sweet of you!:)

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  6. very beautifully expressed...so simple but poignant....
    believe in HIM...whatever he does is best for u...
    :)

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  7. @Nandini :) Thankyew so much Ji :)

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  8. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8OkL2jY35uA&tracker=False

    i saw that you wrote your blog a few weeks before...

    as a person of reflection, i know you have found the light in this experience...;)

    be grateful to it sumit... you've grown ;)

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  9. I have, i have learned to forgive, i have forgiven her now.. i am happy about it :)

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