A moment ago; my heart stopped,
When I looked into those deep brown eyes.
Those doe eyes take my breath away,
Like never before, you make me feel that way.
A moment ago; my body trembled,
When I looked into those deep brown eyes.
I felt a gentle breeze across my face,
I could feel your care, soothing my within.
A moment ago; my life halted,
When I looked into those deep brown eyes.
I saw your teary eyes sparkling,
While holding your hand, through the song I was singing.
A moment ago; I went numb,
When I looked into those deep brown eyes.
When I saw my pain reflecting, through the windows of your eyes.
There; right where my heart lies.
A moment ago; my heart overwhelmed,
When I looked into those deep brown eyes.
I could see my world in them,
That’s when I fell for you, and I’d love to fall again.
And the next moment; my wishes come true,
How? Oh yes! Let me tell that to you.
It’s when you looked at me & looked down again,
You made me fall for you, all over once again.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful tribute to the girl with the brown eyes. I hope she is real and you write from actual experience. Either way really nice !!!
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Thank you so much for proving how enticing and magical our brown eyes are ... beautifully written
ReplyDelete@Larry You are welcome!! :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it Sumit...one of your best.Do keep writing,you are great.
ReplyDelete@Alpana :) Thank you so much.. You are always here for me and my posts! so sweet!!! :) Thanks a LOT!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is lovely! *claps*
ReplyDelete@Cheryl thank you so much :)
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ReplyDelete@Fayerydust Thank you!! :D
ReplyDeletefeels gud to knw that thr r ppl lyk u who knw the value of those eyes....a priceless ode to those priceless eyes.....
ReplyDeletelovely sumit...
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Thank you Nandini :)
ReplyDeletenew here sumit.. and i love this poem.. brown eyes.. lovely :)
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ReplyDelete@Sunita Thank you for coming here :)And Welcome too :D
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ReplyDeleteHey...voww!! Aan haan lucky gal now i shud say..btw u knw i m wiritng on deep mysterious eyes...;) its nt completed yt...takin long time.
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful!!!
@Manisha Thank you so much :) post me a link when you are done :)
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